A Better Tomorrow

which is a problem I often have when writing. Furthermore, regarding my weaknesses in writing, I want to learn how to make my transitions from paragraph-to-paragraph and different topics more smoother so that my papers aren't choppy, I want get better at writing bibliographies which is what I have the most trouble of writing when I write research papers, and improve my skills in writing research papers, such as being able to cite sources within my writings and not being repetitive…

The internal and external environment is critical in any organization. The outside environment for Crunch Fitness incorporates its clients, government, economy, rivalry, and public opinion. The clients are the immediate consequence of whether any organization will flourish. Crunch is a service orientated business. Their service is the convenience of a workout space with an assortment of classes, machines, as well as trainers, tanning beds and massages available upon the membership packages. The…

Over the last four essays, my ability to write has improved exponentially from the beginning of the year. Through the four essays I have learned valuable skills that will be the support for future essays. On the two beginning essays my ability to use vocabulary and other valuable skills was improving. By being supplied by information from the instructor, and fellow classmates I was able to spot my weaknesses in my writing and improve where improvement was needed. As the semester progress each…

Exercising My Writing Skills Writing is evolving by the day in the English language, in other words communication is evolving on the daily since writing is our main source of communication. Learning how to write the English language in an academic setting has been one of my greatest accomplishments as a scholar, despite the fact that, I am still learning new skills daily on how to improve my writing. Even though, I am not the best the writer, I have gained enough strength in my writing to…

strategy. As I understand by his explanation using colorful words does not mean using literary colors to pen down words rather to get depth and meaning out of the message that is to be conveyed. Using these words would in turn help the reader formulate better the scene that the writer is trying to convey. This is an effective way of author to audience communication I personally find this one of the most important strategies that any writer should follow because, being a writer the main purpose…

Since starting this class I have noticed how much I write. I journal at least once a week, I’ve had assignments of all kinds that I’ve had papers for, and I spend a great deal of my time on my phone answering messages. I tried my best to get an A in this class, even though I got sick often, and my attendance was poor on the worst days. I tried to participate even when I wasn’t there; for example, I was messaging Garrett argument ideas through Facebook while I as in bed sick. This was one of my…

Experience Analysis The event or activity I went was invited by one of my friends. He came from Brazil. During the event, I talked to many different people who also came from Brazil and these people are from different race groups. After the event, there are a few things affected me. During the event, I talked to many different people. First is that when I was communicating with different people, I was very objective. I used to neglect other’s words and use some intrinsic thoughts that were…

Dr. Osterhaus, I came to the conclusion that a rhetorical analysis was not as foreign as I though it was. The best improvement I made on my paper was based on the feedback I received at the writing center. It was that I needed to have my paper flow better and not “jump around” so much when I am writing. Furthermore, I also think that I really spent a great amount of time researching the rhetorical terms and figuring out how the author of my TED Talk used them to appeal the audience. For example,…

My intended major at the moment is Kinesiology- Athletic Training with the possibility of going to Graduate School and even medical school. I enjoy the on field aspect of athletic training as well as you connections you make with the patients, but in order to gain the most knowledge can those higher level educations programs are necessary. I met Mr. Winterstein awhile back and told him may aspiration of being an Athletic Trainer for the Badgers and he said if I really want it, it’s up to me to…

Quote integration can either make or break a proposal in an essay. Effectively integrating quotes can improve the quality of an essay by providing evidence and support of a claim or statement. Quote integration is a key, structural element that is incorporated in essay writing. The use of quote integration in my essays have improved dramatically over the course of the semester. When comparing my first essay to my third essay, my use of quote integration has improved profoundly. The sandwich…