1. As you composed your first draft of the essay, did you imagine your audience as sympathetic, hostile, or somewhere in between? Upon composing the first draft of my argumentative essay on “A Look at Modern Culture and Its Impact on Childhood” I found that my audience would be sympathetic. When it comes to discussing any impact on children/adolescents, it is in our nature to automatically become concern and defend the helpless (mother bear syndrome). 2. What was the central claim of your…
This semester I have done well with improving my writing but been offensively immature with fulfilling commitments. This semester I have come to class every day, engaged a little in class lessons although not a lot, and came to class prepared most of the time. I was really bad at making conferences which is really bad and has to change in the future. My next English class I will have to make conferences while also continue improving my writing. The MEAL Plan has really helped me with structuring…
Each sentence should be placed strategically to defend your argument, also known as your thesis statement. 2. Thesis Statements Creating thesis statements in college might appear to be different than the ones that you created in high school. For example, in high school you may remember assembling a…
hundred ninety eight. This is an argumentative writing that author claimed that is an issue in between both sexes; man and woman. This topic immediately made me pondering for questions like: Is that anything wrong with the relationship in the current society? Is author has a personal relationship or marriage issue, therefore she questioned about the need of man in woman’s life? In my opinion, a relationship either marriage or not, it should not to be overly burdensome. Example: there is many…
The poem on “On Turning Ten” by Billy Collins is about the reality of growing up. Collins incorporated rhetorical devices to covey to the reader the reluctance one can experience when turning a year older. The tone of the poem centers the emotions on turning ten and leaving childhood behind. On Turning Ten is written from a child’s perspective, portraying the enjoyments of a child. On the contrary, it also portrays sadness of aging and great loss of the innocence of a child. At the same time the…
Hacker and Sommers’ in “Constructing Reasonable Arguments”, taking a stand on a controversial topic, swaying the reader with evidence and analysis, and citing all sources used within an essay are the stepping-stones to produce a well manufactured argumentative essay. The main goal is to persuade the reader to choose the writer's side of the argument over the opposing side in an informative way. Arguments happen everywhere all the time, which means there is more than one way to look at an issue.…
apologize about contacting you so late, but I had a few questions about my grade on the Visual Analysis paper. I based my writing off of what you mentioned in class as well as the syllabus on Blackboard. You mentioned my paper was too much of an argumentative paper rather than an analysis of my image. Your feedback: "– The argument is strong, but so much of it is YOUR argument (and unfortunately I am not grading on argument or support)." From Blackboard: "The aim of this assignment is to…
For many people, being able to relate to a story can be integral in whether or not they have actually enjoyed it; though in more extreme cases, it might be the only criteria necessary for one to enjoy it. Frankly, this is why the realism movement in nearly all media has been so successful. One part of the realism movement that is of relatively central importance, however, deals with American Literature in the late 1800’s; the literary landscape changed after the Civil War out of analysis of the…
Dr. Amen’s lecture helps me to understand how different parts of the brain can negatively affect a person when the parts are dysfunctional. In the video, Dr. Amen states that a hyperactive anterior cingulate gyrus can cause a person to become argumentative and it can also lead a person to have a grudge-holding tendency. Dr. Amen also states that low activity in the front part of the brain can cause a person to have attention deficit disorder and argument-starter behavior. Dr. Amen also motivates…
I will not lie, I am not perfect. I can be argumentative, slightly detached at times, too straightforward, and over analyze everything. Though some may view these traits as flaws, I see them as reasons why I would be a perfect Disciplinary Committee representative. These traits will, if elected, aid me in unbiased decision making while allowing me to provide thoughtful consideration for each student’s case. A Disciplinary Committee member must be a good objective reasoner and open minded. I…