Descriptive Essay Essay

Descriptive Writing Comparison Essay Students often get bored in class, especially in English. In order to spark interest animals can be brought in. My English teacher, Mrs. Christy Clay, sparked the interest of everyone of her students when she brought in her dog, Monte, and her hamster, Oreo. The presence of these two pets allowed for student to compare and contrast, and to form new ideas about forms of learning. My essay will include my opinions, the comparisons I made between this unlikely…

This was because of all the stories I told and how descriptive I was. Especially my third grade, Mrs. Fisher, which encouraged me to write as much as I wanted. She said it would help me become a great writer and it made my papers more interesting. I wrote a great deal while I was in school. Sometimes I would…

capabilities, and in a way I was right too, because other students were good at writing and I was inferior to them. Even though I had good grades on the classes I took it took me much longer to accomplish a good essay then others. I had countless amounts of revisions that led up to a semi decent essay, not even a good one. I took two…

unique in their writing process and many times, although it may not be noticeable, students tend to feel pressured to apply certain writing “rules”. This is due to the fact that they don’t normally tend to (for example) write an outline before an essay. With all respects, I believe that writing shouldn’t have to always fulfil the specific rules given by the teachers to the students. I believe so because, each and every one of the students has a different writing process that works well for them.…

would be likely that his fiction would be very different than it is ow. However, he writes about what is necessary to write about: anti-totalitarianism and pro-democracy. What is interesting to this reader was Orwell’s confessions at the end of the essay, stating that all writers are rather possessed by a strange demon because writing is really not very enjoyable.…

Lopez’s essay was the one that stood out the most to me. The description in this essay is quite poetic and appropriate, “They slammed glistening flukes on the beach, jarring the muscles of human thighs like Jello at a distance of a hundred yards (69)” and “sunlight sparkles in rivulets running off folds in its corrugated back (69).” Every description seems to add to the sad and beautiful nature of the whale’s presence and their ultimate death. I thought the author did a great job telling the…

attending Head Start. I learned the basics that year and in Kindergarten, such as: writing my name, colors, shapes and how to write sentences. From then on, I learned to write three paragraph essays; as the school years went by, I learned how to write longer essays and how there were different types of essays. Writing is a fundamental in life that we need to learn and enhance because it is a form of expressing ourselves and analyzing the writing world. It has shaped my writing throughout my…

These papers include a narrative that details a important event in my life, a literary analysis about the theme of revenge in Shakespeare 's Hamlet, a multi genre about the arguing the reasons toward establishing nuclear power in America, and a essay I wrote for collage admittance about my lifetime goals. Each of these papers have different goals, and I believe I have accomplished the goals I have set out to do in these papers. The fist paper I wrote this year in English 111 was a narrative.…

I've struggled with those because I have never really understood how to transition to the thesis statement then go on to the additionally paragraph. For instance, in my argumentative essay for the book “Into the Wild” I did a really good starting sentence and a good ending sentence saying, “Now-a-days society ignores nature and what it holds so deeply. We need to prevent these forest fires or killing of animals because that’s precious…

Commit Revised Descriptive/ Reflective Place Essay Reflection: What makes this essay better than its original form is that I added more detail to give the reader a better understanding. Just adding one small detail can change the reader's perspective. I have also learned to incorporate different types of sentences to improve my writing style. “Come on dude, just do it.” Brady’s encouraging voice kept echoing over and over in my head. Pressure filled my mind as if it were air filling a…