“Tin Man” is another piece of writing that I didn’t like. The logos for that story was dumb and the characters had me ripping my hair off during my read. Same thing with “The Red Bow,” that story had me paper gritting my teeth due to its logos as well. “The College Rape Overcorrection” was something that could’ve been toned down a bit in terms of listing out statistics. “Shame and Survival” had me rolling my eyes because Monica Lewinsky was the publisher of the article and it felt too biased. Stories like “This Old Man”, “America’s Next Top Weiner”, and “Vietnam Syndrome” leaves me with no comment. I don’t know why, but those stories just didn’t click with me. I don’t hate them, nor do I like them. Which pretty much leaves me with a few writings left like “Jackie’s Goodbye,” “Inside the Iron Closet,” and “Bret, Unbroken.” Which I adore and love. And I think that’s because those three stories contained so much pathos and the writing style had me hooked. “Jackie’s Goodbye” had a mixture of personal events with data. “Inside the Iron Closet” did a similar thing as well. And “Bret, Unbroken” did a crazy job in using a second person point of view. I think what those three stories had most in common was the heavy pathos that they all carried. The pathos had me reeled in and it connected with me. The stories all told me the lives of real people that they actually had encounters with! It was all real and nonfiction. The other writings didn’t do that job as they were either fiction or stories that were told from interviewing a person. The characters in the three pieces I like were well indulged with their interactions with the real people. It felt real to me and I love how each of the authors did a great job in describing the scenes with words. I even remember some of the quotes that were spoken by Jackie’s grandmother to
“Tin Man” is another piece of writing that I didn’t like. The logos for that story was dumb and the characters had me ripping my hair off during my read. Same thing with “The Red Bow,” that story had me paper gritting my teeth due to its logos as well. “The College Rape Overcorrection” was something that could’ve been toned down a bit in terms of listing out statistics. “Shame and Survival” had me rolling my eyes because Monica Lewinsky was the publisher of the article and it felt too biased. Stories like “This Old Man”, “America’s Next Top Weiner”, and “Vietnam Syndrome” leaves me with no comment. I don’t know why, but those stories just didn’t click with me. I don’t hate them, nor do I like them. Which pretty much leaves me with a few writings left like “Jackie’s Goodbye,” “Inside the Iron Closet,” and “Bret, Unbroken.” Which I adore and love. And I think that’s because those three stories contained so much pathos and the writing style had me hooked. “Jackie’s Goodbye” had a mixture of personal events with data. “Inside the Iron Closet” did a similar thing as well. And “Bret, Unbroken” did a crazy job in using a second person point of view. I think what those three stories had most in common was the heavy pathos that they all carried. The pathos had me reeled in and it connected with me. The stories all told me the lives of real people that they actually had encounters with! It was all real and nonfiction. The other writings didn’t do that job as they were either fiction or stories that were told from interviewing a person. The characters in the three pieces I like were well indulged with their interactions with the real people. It felt real to me and I love how each of the authors did a great job in describing the scenes with words. I even remember some of the quotes that were spoken by Jackie’s grandmother to