Theme Of Mrs Tilscher's Class

Improved Essays
After reading upon the review of Carol Ann Duffy’s poem, “Mrs Tilscher’s class”, which was written by John Smith on the back page of The New York Times(which was published on 14 march 2016) stating the poem lacks a theme and has a cursory meaning behind it, which I strongly disagree because there is theme which is portrayed by the use of different literature devices by the author ;which occurs consistently throughout the poem and has a deeper meaning behind it- which he completely missed out on- and could have seen it, if only he had analysed the poem at a deeper level.
The theme which is consistently there is an idea of the transition we have from our childhood to a young adult being arduous, and along the way, the things we have learnt from
…show more content…
Smith missed out was when we juxtapose the tone and lexical choices used in the first stanza to the last stanza, we can clearly see the change in the author’s mentality and maturity, which is the theme of the poem. The tone in the first part of the paragraph is one of warmth, fondness, and of adoration, it portrays the headlong energy of being youthful. However, as we progress through the poem towards the end, the tone shifts and becomes slightly more troublesome compared to the previous stanza, demonstrating some sort of turmoil the narrator faces, which is adolescent. A crucial example is when ‘a rough boy told you how how you were born. You kicked him, but stared at your parents, appalled ‘; we can clearly see as the narrator progresses through the poem her naivety is lost slowly and has a change in phase where she becomes more self-aware and has many questions to be answered. How can a reviewer, who has been writing for newspapers for more than 10 years about books and poems, miss such a significant …show more content…
Smith could have derived a theme is using the imagery Carol Ann Duffy’s poem used, such as the metaphor, ‘the inky tadpoles changed from commas into exclamation’, which shows the children growing up to be something more complex as an exclamation mark portrays more feelings than a comma or just simply growing up as tadpoles grow into frogs; simultaneously, they are expanding their knowledge through what they learnt in Mrs. Tilscher’s class. Or another one would be, ‘impatient to be grown, the sky split open into a thunderstorm’, which again suggest energy, opportunity, new horizons, 'split open' and maybe some emotive turmoil. Furthermore, another use of imagery is when the narrator describes herself being slightly aggravated when leaving elementary school, such as ‘Reports were handed out. You ran through the gates’, this display the idea that she was desperate to elementary school for the last time, but it takes her from a zone of safety into a the perilous unknown as the sentence is followed by ‘the sky split open into a

Related Documents

  • Improved Essays

    Deadline by Chris Crutcher is about a boy names Ben who is eighteen years old, a senior in high school and lives in a small town in Idaho. One day when Ben went for his sports physical his doctors tells him that he has a blood disease and only has less then a year to live. Ben decided not to tell anyone about his disease and to not take treatments. The doctor wasn’t very happy about Ben’s decision, but there was nothing he could do about it, because Ben was eighteen and could legally make his own decisions. Normally Ben would run in cross-country, but since he knows that his time here on earth is cut short he decided to join the football team instead.…

    • 619 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    In Cold Blood: Reasons why it was banned In Cold Blood, a known book all around for its creativity and masterpiece of reportage. In which the reason it’s said that In Cold Blood is a masterpiece of reportage is because this book was actually based on a true story were the Clutter family was murdered because Smith and Dick both wanted money however they didn’t find any so they decided to kill the family in cold blood. Truman Streckfus Persons was his name at first when his mother was still happily married to his father Arch Persons.…

    • 1148 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Decent Essays

    Long Walk To Water Theme

    • 299 Words
    • 2 Pages

    Theme. A theme describes the message or the lesson that the author is trying to share. In the novel A Long Walk to Water by Linda Sue Park, the theme is nature can present many challenges to humans. For example, on page eight it states, “Then she picked up another thorn and used it to poke and prod at the first one. She pressed her lips together against the pain.’’…

    • 299 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Decent Essays
  • Improved Essays

    As we all know, the theme of a story is the lesson that is being taught throughout the novel. But a theme can also be the subject of a talk, a piece of writing, or a person's thoughts. All stories have a theme, but they may not always be directly stated. This requires readers to dig deep down into the text and analyze the lessons that they have acquired through the book. Between the two excerpts, "Angelas Ashes" and "The Street", there is common theme that perseverance is important when times get tough in life.…

    • 1234 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Empowering poetry allows a poet to relate to their audience through universal ideas of death and loss and the consolation brought by childhood memories. Gwen Harwood’s Father and Child and focuses on a recollection of childhood memories that deeply impacted her perspective on mortality and her relationship with her father. The mirroring structure of the Father and Child depicts a complete role reversal between the persona and her father, showing a switch in comforting each other in the face of death. Part two, Nightfall, opens with a general atmosphere of nostalgia, as the persona, not longer a child, reflects on her fathers approaching death. These notions evoke empathy which allows Harwood to connect with her audience by teaching them how…

    • 1019 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    When comparing and looking at the two poems “Graded Paper” by Mark Halliday and “Learning to Read” by Frances E. W. Harper, you can see that the two are different in many ways. They are two poems from two very distinct time periods. The diverse elements and styles that are used in these poems make them unique in their own way. But, while they have different forms, subjects, word choices, and themes, their overall tones, while not exactly the same throughout the poems, can be seen as similar in a way as they both result in a happy and positive feeling.…

    • 848 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Jack Nguyen Mrs. Wright Ap English 3: Period 5 11 March 2016 SNR Group Meeting #4: Discussion Focus Questions 4 and 5 4. Theme and other abstract ideas What are the major themes of the work? Provide a short phrase for each theme.…

    • 1123 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    The Lightning Thief is the first young adult book written by Rick Riordan. It was published July 1, 2005. It is the first book in the series Percy Jackson and The Olympians. It is a book about greek mythology with fictional characters. This book is about a twelve year old boy who learns that he is a demigod.…

    • 1194 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Sexism: "You are burnt beyond recognition," he added, looking at his wife as one looks at a valuable piece of personal property which has suffered some damage. - this text evidence supports the theme of the text because it shows that Mr. Pontellier only valued Mrs. Pontellier as a trophy or property of his, not as a woman or human being. "If it was not a mother's place to look after children, whose on earth was it?" - This evidence can relate to the theme of sexism by showing that, the one who is supposed to care for the children most are the mothers, no one else could.…

    • 743 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Thelma and Louise, a film by Carolyn Ann Khouri, trails the liberations of two working class women in the 90’s. These women plan a weekend away from the men in their lives due to the fact that Thelma’s husband is a misogynistic man who feels that a woman’s job consists only of housework and cooking. In the first scene of the movie Thelma wants to ask her husband, Darryl, for permission to go on the trip with Louise. He yells at her and she quickly changes the subject. In my opinion, this is one of the most crucial scenes in the entire film because it outlines the sexism and discrimination that these two women will face throughout the course of the movie.…

    • 837 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    The Victims Poem Analysis

    • 1110 Words
    • 5 Pages

    Focusing on word choice, the speaker states, “She took it and/took it,” using the word “it” to describe the abuse (1-2). Although abuse is seen as a very serious topic in this poem, the effects of the speaker’s abuse is lessened by calling it a vague name and by doing so, shines all the spotlight onto how the speaker’s feelings toward the father as well as his own victimization is the main focus of the poem. Lending insight into the tone, the speaker says, “Then you were fired, and we/grinned inside” (4-5). By using imagery, Olds shows the tone of the poem by means of the way the speaker and their family finds malicious glee in the father’s slow deterioration. The speaker continues on to state, “Would they take your/suits back too, those dark/carcasses hung in your closet” (11-13).…

    • 1110 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    In the story Marigolds, by Eugenia Collier, the reader discovers the theme is to be innocent is to be a child and in order for one to mature, they must become compassionate. Out of the five clues to theme, the most relevant ones to this text are the conflict and solution, what the main character learns, and the stories symbolism. In the story Marigolds, there is an extremely important overarching theme that is still very relevant today. Conflict and solution are a huge clue as to what the theme of the story is. Lizabeth, the main character, doesn't know whether or not she should listen to the child or women in her and becomes confused in who she really is.…

    • 843 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Decent Essays

    Hidden Intellectualism

    • 437 Words
    • 2 Pages

    The (Futile) Pursuit of the American Dream by Barbara Ehrenreich, Hidden Intellectualism by Gerald Graff, and Nuclear Waste by Richard A. Muller are all articles in the book They Say, I say by Gerald Graff and Cathy Birkenstein that give readers an example of different types of college level writing styles with the purpose providing them with a source of influence to assist further develop own skills. Looking into these reading superficially, many would observe that these reading all address very different issues, which they do. However, while digging deep into meaning these writings, I found key instances where they share similar these. One of these themes stuck out the most to me. Don't Blame the Eater, Hidden Intellectualism and Nuclear Waste all address observations and insights involving the American educational system.…

    • 437 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Decent Essays
  • Superior Essays

    Good And Evil In Sulla, By Toni Morrison

    • 1156 Words
    • 5 Pages
    • 1 Works Cited

    Throughout the story there are many themes that implore the reader to look more in depth at their meanings and…

    • 1156 Words
    • 5 Pages
    • 1 Works Cited
    Superior Essays
  • Improved Essays

    The Great Gatsby Society and Class F. Scott Fitzgerald presents many themes in his novel, The Great Gatsby. One of the themes is how people behave depending on their social status. Social Class is an important theme in the book. Gatsby throws huge, elaborate parties in hopes Daisy will hear about them and attend one. Gatsby doesn’t know that Daisy would never go to one unless she’s invited, because she sees it as a lower-class type of party.…

    • 379 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Improved Essays