A strong thesis is the beginning step in creating good, effective writing. A strong thesis builds the framework for the entire paper. Therefore, when the reader arrives at the thesis he or she should know what the writer is trying to convey. A strong thesis consists of the main argument of the paper and little else. The thesis will become difficult to find if the thesis statement is too wordy. A strong thesis should …show more content…
Despite believing she loves Frank, Eveline uses surprisingly neutral words to depict Frank and her affection for him. She uses descriptors such as “very kind, manly, openhearted” (Joyce 80), “elated” (89), and “pleasantly confused” (93). Moreover, after Eveline decides to leave with Frank, she cries out “Escape! She must escape! Frank would save her. He would give her life, perhaps love, too... Frank would take her in his arms, fold her in his arms. He would save her.” (136-140). Eveline does not use words such as love or embrace, but words like ‘life’, ‘save’, and ‘perhaps love’. Additionally, when Eveline arrives at the dock and slowly realizes that she should stay in Ireland, her interactions with Frank are described much more abusive with words like “seize” (156) and “shouted” (166). Furthermore, Eveline even stops using Frank’s name after she starts to disembark from the boat. She no longer refers to him as Frank, but just pronouns such as him and he (Carlson …show more content…
Only a good, effective writer is capable to wield this seemingly unwieldy power. This writer controls the whirlwind and focuses and forms whatever he or she desires. Every writer who takes the challenge and masters these techniques is capable of controlling this whirlwind; it only requires a strong thesis, convincing and relevant points, and solid support. Once a student learns to perfect good, effective writing, they have the ability to apply these skills in a multitude of other opportunities. Students can use these skills in writing papers for other classes, resumes, application, or even work emails. Practically everything a student write can be applied to what he or she has discovered by mastering good, effective