My 102% grade on this was up to par with the previous two essays proving that after the first essay I figured out what had to be done and I did it. Therefore, my improvement as a writer was also evident in the argumentative research paper. In this piece I mastered introduction and conclusion, thorough examples/research, and commentary to back it up. I also used concrete organization to present the problem, explain the details, research, and then provide a solution plan for how the reign of ISIS can be ended. One minor problem I experienced was in my commentary. At some points my commentary was phenomenal, but at one point in the essay I could have gone further in using commentary to back up my research. The very few mistakes and high grade on this piece resemble how far I have come as a writer since the first essay of the
My 102% grade on this was up to par with the previous two essays proving that after the first essay I figured out what had to be done and I did it. Therefore, my improvement as a writer was also evident in the argumentative research paper. In this piece I mastered introduction and conclusion, thorough examples/research, and commentary to back it up. I also used concrete organization to present the problem, explain the details, research, and then provide a solution plan for how the reign of ISIS can be ended. One minor problem I experienced was in my commentary. At some points my commentary was phenomenal, but at one point in the essay I could have gone further in using commentary to back up my research. The very few mistakes and high grade on this piece resemble how far I have come as a writer since the first essay of the