Narrative Essay: The 5 Kids Were Getting Up

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It was twilight and Eva was getting sleepy.
"I 'm getting sleepy,and it getting dark, I should go to sleep." Said Eva in her mind. After that, she started to get ready to go to bed,so Eva went to bed, and in a blink of an eye she was asleep. But no one in a million years would think what she would dream,but me... In the dream It was morning about 7:00 am the 5 kids were getting up .First the oldest, Luke the next oldest is Zoe after she comes Declan then Samantha after her comes Ethiopia and last but not least Jaxon.Anyways They don’t have parents because when their parents went to find a cure for Jaxon since he was born with a sickness.,they died while riding the dangerous sail cart over the sea of monsters. So one day the kids thought of
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“Stop moving Ethiopia if not the snake will start to tighten its grip on your neck and so that I can try to remove it!”yelled Luke
She stopped moving and since he was a good aim ,he was able to shoot a rock with his slingshot at the snake. She ran to hug Luke.
“Thanks!”said Ethiopia
“No prob”said Luke
After that, he forgave Zoe and they kept hunting after they finished hunting that caught approximately 17 animals (sadly counting the dead mother rabbit
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And a mermaid watching went up to the surface to help them (secretly their mother which they didn’t know)
“Um excuse me but you have to solve a riddle to make the sail cart move.”said the mermaid.
All the kids thought she was beautiful she had brown hair just like their mother and silver colored eyes just like their mom plus she had the same skin color dark brown!The mermaid even knew their names!!
“Could it be her, our long lost mother !”Luke was saying in his mind.
“First let me tell you this my name, Ellenzia and now let me tell you you riddle:Which fish go to heaven when they die?”said Ellenzia
“I know! An Angelfish”answered Ethiopia
“You are correct now you can sail! good bye kidose”said Ellenzia and swam away
“Okay then that was weird,let 's get going so now that the sail cart works”said

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