1. INTRO:
Yes, the author attempt to capture readers’ interest in the introductory paragraphs.
Yes, the author clearly state in any introductory paragraphs what she is going to argue in the Unit 4 Research Paper.
The argumentative claim is that Americans view Muslim as a treat because of the 9/11 terrorist attack many citizens are concern with there safety. Congress then passed laws to protect it 's citizen.
Yes, I personally think the argumentative claim is interesting and different from what’s already been argued before. Since, this topic is so broad there has been so many talks about recent events that has been going on in the news lately for Muslims. It might be diffcult to find other cliams becuause of this events going on. But I 'm sure you will do …show more content…
CONCLUSION:
Yes, the author briefly summarize her argument without repeating the introduction. She hits some important points however, she hasn 't hit the major points yet because some of the sectioin in this essay isn 't finish yet.
Yes, the author elaborate her argument.
Yes, Stating that we need to learn more about Muslims and their religion.
6. CITATION:
Yes, the author did introduce sources clearly.
Yes, the author give the title of the source and the full name of the author of the source when introducing it.
Yes, the author follow up paraphrased from a source. However, in the background she points a lot of good examples supporting her calim yet she didn 't really explain why it is important to the argument.
No, I wasn 't confused because her paper is very clear to read.
No, the author did not used any information from a source without citing it.
REMEMBER: You must cite sources when you paraphrase (i.e. put the original information in your own words) from a source, as well as when directly quoting from a source.
No, the author did not cite any page numbers. Make sure to do that when citing a source and if it doesn 't have page numbers just count the paragraph and cite it that way.
7. WORKS CITED
Yes, the author attempt to capture readers’ interest in the introductory paragraphs.
Yes, the author clearly state in any introductory paragraphs what she is going to argue in the Unit 4 Research Paper.
The argumentative claim is that Americans view Muslim as a treat because of the 9/11 terrorist attack many citizens are concern with there safety. Congress then passed laws to protect it 's citizen.
Yes, I personally think the argumentative claim is interesting and different from what’s already been argued before. Since, this topic is so broad there has been so many talks about recent events that has been going on in the news lately for Muslims. It might be diffcult to find other cliams becuause of this events going on. But I 'm sure you will do …show more content…
CONCLUSION:
Yes, the author briefly summarize her argument without repeating the introduction. She hits some important points however, she hasn 't hit the major points yet because some of the sectioin in this essay isn 't finish yet.
Yes, the author elaborate her argument.
Yes, Stating that we need to learn more about Muslims and their religion.
6. CITATION:
Yes, the author did introduce sources clearly.
Yes, the author give the title of the source and the full name of the author of the source when introducing it.
Yes, the author follow up paraphrased from a source. However, in the background she points a lot of good examples supporting her calim yet she didn 't really explain why it is important to the argument.
No, I wasn 't confused because her paper is very clear to read.
No, the author did not used any information from a source without citing it.
REMEMBER: You must cite sources when you paraphrase (i.e. put the original information in your own words) from a source, as well as when directly quoting from a source.
No, the author did not cite any page numbers. Make sure to do that when citing a source and if it doesn 't have page numbers just count the paragraph and cite it that way.
7. WORKS CITED