Every sentence in an essay has to support the thesis statement. Five mistakes to avoid when making the thesis are simply stating the topic, cluttering, being unreasonable, stating facts, and stating the thesis as a question. Some writers might often profit from using essay maps: “Many thesis statements will benefit from the addition of an essay map, a brief statement in the introductory paragraph introducing the major points to be discussed in the essay” (Wyrick 42). Essay maps not only introduce the main point of an essay but provide a set of guidelines for organizing the essay and helps keep the writer from wandering off into areas vaguely related to the thesis. Even though essay maps might be helpful to writers and readers, they might sound too mechanical, repetitive, or obvious. While writing a thesis, the author should try to avoid words that depend on personal …show more content…
The plan helps the author organize information to be included in the essay. Every body paragraph must contain one major point in the discussion. Every sentence in a paragraph must support the topic sentence. The paragraphs must be adequately developed with clear supporting details. For a body paragraph to be effective, the author should avoid vague generalities. The four means to achieve paragraph unity is to make sure every sentence relates to the topic sentence’s main idea, avoid topic draft, beware the tendency to end paragraphs with new ideas, and the support sentences must support the topic sentence. The writer needs to know that informal or working outlines are there to help the writer not control the writer. The author should start a body paragraph with a topic