My Rhetorical Analysis Assignment

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I found that I need to improve everything when it comes to writing in general. I have two problems; First is every time I am going to write something I always think about the subject in Spanish and that is a big problem because in Spanish is different from English. Everything is backward and the verbs and transitions are very different. That makes it more difficult for me because I have to go back and try to make sense on what I am writing. The second problem that I have is, that I like numbers better than letters and that makes my life a little bit complicated. Having taken the class it helps to find out that I need to get it together when it comes to writing. It was a reality check for me and I am glad because now I am more
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One thing that Professor Mathis helped me was to change sentences and paragraphs to make sense or be more a stronger point. Writing the rhetorical analysis assignment was a challenge for me because trying to explain something that has a lot of information to people that had no idea and try to select information for a group of people that would be interested sometimes can be hard. The best tool I had, to put in track the assignment was the rhetorical triangle that made a big difference in my assignment that’s a great tool to have …show more content…
The coworkers help me with my writing and they challenge me, one of the lady’s from my job gave me a book call “The Alchemist” by Paulo Coelho. During the summer I took a class of cultural diversities and the readings were really interesting that they change the point of view that I had when it comes to social problems in our society it really impact my life to make a change. The professor challenge me to the limit and with the reading and the writing I was able to have a better understating about the problems that we are facing in the society. The other experience was an art class, the class I was put on the spot to write a 12 page paper about art, that was my masterpiece that I created, for that I utilized the writing center on campus and online as well. I was determined to do a great job, plus I was on the spot because I was the only one in the class that was not an Art Major, so I felt more obligated to do an outstanding

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