My name is student X. I sincerely appreciate the writing course, especially now that it is almost complete. I have learned a lot, especially in terms of critical thinking, analysis, comparative assessment, rhetorical techniques, thorough editing of punctuation, format, sentence structure and patience in formulating one edited draft into another. The writing course has helped me to express my thoughts and ideas in an organized, professional and formal manner. Moreover, I have also learned to integrate the ideas of other authors through proper citation, paraphrasing and summarizing the relevant perspectives. I believe that I have advanced my writing skills through this course. I am especially grateful to you, as my professor, in your patience
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It was entitled “If Only Robots Had Color.” The paper was addressed to the United States Congress, in regard to unlawful / unnecessary killings that were promulgated by the police security officers. One solution that can be envisioned to remedy discrimination and injustice is the use of robotic police officers that know no color, gender bias, unequal social status, and other discriminatory factors. Nevertheless, laws must be formally enacted toward achieving this equal purpose. In writing this paper, I have become vigilant in tackling political and social issues that have become cumbersome to ordinary citizens, especially those who belong to minority groups and with struggling social demeanor. My writing skills have substantially improved, in terms of using rhetorical techniques of persuading the audience and formal content. In fact, in this paper, I have ideally expressed myself with the support of annotated bibliographies and other scholarly materials. The RIP essay is a culmination of what I have learned previously in my two essays and in class. I tend to become more objective and specific in my assessment through providing more examples. I have become cautious in generalizing circumstances through the use of appropriate phrases and sentences. For instance, in the following paragraph, I have provided more examples on how robots can become non-discriminative and effective at
It was entitled “If Only Robots Had Color.” The paper was addressed to the United States Congress, in regard to unlawful / unnecessary killings that were promulgated by the police security officers. One solution that can be envisioned to remedy discrimination and injustice is the use of robotic police officers that know no color, gender bias, unequal social status, and other discriminatory factors. Nevertheless, laws must be formally enacted toward achieving this equal purpose. In writing this paper, I have become vigilant in tackling political and social issues that have become cumbersome to ordinary citizens, especially those who belong to minority groups and with struggling social demeanor. My writing skills have substantially improved, in terms of using rhetorical techniques of persuading the audience and formal content. In fact, in this paper, I have ideally expressed myself with the support of annotated bibliographies and other scholarly materials. The RIP essay is a culmination of what I have learned previously in my two essays and in class. I tend to become more objective and specific in my assessment through providing more examples. I have become cautious in generalizing circumstances through the use of appropriate phrases and sentences. For instance, in the following paragraph, I have provided more examples on how robots can become non-discriminative and effective at