Writing And Writing Process

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Rosenwasser and Stephen’s “Fourteen Short Takes on Writing And Writing Process” contain a variety of helpful tips for writing a strong and clear college essay. Banking, one of the fourteen ‘topics’, stood out the most for me, mainly but I have personally experienced this problem countless times in a classroom setting. Most of the incidences happen when the teacher becomes impatient with the class. Instead of leading a discussion where the students are in control of their own ideas, the teacher would push along and accidentally dissuade thinking.

Banking is essentially the concept of math, where there is a single input and a single output, which doesn’t allow for much thought or critical thinking. As Rosenwasser and Stephen noted, “being able

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