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What has been challenging or problematic moment in your life?
One thing that has been challenging or problematic in my life was when my mother left my siblings and me. She chose the wrong person that she thought she was gone live with the rest of her life. He was an abuser and we did not even notice. We did not notice until he laid his first hand on my momma. It was like one in the morning and I saw blood on our back porch and blood on a face towel and clothes. My sister and I talked about it and we asked my momma “Did he hit you momma?” she said yea but it was only an “accident”. She knew I was not about to fall for that. The thing is that it had gotten worse. December 4th 2014 was the worst day of my life. He threatened

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