Write A Story Ending With Spencer's Surgery

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When Spencer has to be rushed to the hospital with symptoms of appendicitis, her mother notices a strange tattoo on her sixteen-year-old daughter’s abdomen and finds out that she has been leading a secret life in a Satanic cult.

Just as I started to jog my memory I realized my mother standing at my side. She had a nervous look, as the doctor helped me get ready for the surgery they cut off my shirt and my mom saw it. The one thing she wasn’t supposed to see, she was stunned, she sped out of the room. I would have jolted out of the room but my appendicitis was holding me down. I started to ball on the spot, I assume the doctor thought it was because I was nervous for the surgery. I was thinking about my mother when I began to fall asleep--my mind was blank.
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The large bushy trees with the cinnamon colored acorns lye on the ground. While the delicate orange petals stitched onto the green stems swung with the wind. There was a big cave, and it seemed to be that I was moving closer with no control. My arms were strapped to the stretcher with big masked men carrying me. There was a long line continuing with all my fellow friends, well --who used to be. I took a glance at my hands which started to turn wrinkly, as were my feet which were chilled by the wind. Then I looked up - but it was just my boss. I work in a big, old, abandoned building where we bring people in and beat them if they don’t believe what we do. He wore a big red cape with a hood covering his face, he had never told me his name though. The men then let me free out of the stretcher, my boss pulled me over to the side to talk. He was saying all these confusing words that I had no clue what they meant but then I read, saw, and heard the words “It’s your time” come out of his

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