Dear Mrs. Audra Rouse and Delgado students,
I attended my first ever collegiate class at Delgado Community College this semester. I feel Exuberant knowing I can excel and comprehend on a college level. Over the course of the year I have learned many new styles, tips and guidelines to writing. For my portfolio I mainly focused on revision using “combatting absenteeism “and “Olympic water sport” because those essays had a substantial amount of room for improvement. I will be using the “student profile” because it proves my mastery of writing profile essays. In college being concrete is important, so I also chose the descriptive paragraph as an example of an acquired style choice.
With my proposing a solution essay, “combatting absenteeism” I moved some paragraphs around to make the problem of absenteeism more clearly brought to the reader’s attention. While moving paragraphs around, I added transitions and made others read smoother so the essay flowed interruption free like a song. To meet the MLA requirements I fixed any errors in my work-cited page as well. This essay was my favorite essay to write this year, because I chose a topic that was interesting to me.
Writing about my favorite event in the Olympics gave me a run for my Grade for sure, although I received a good grade. “Olympic water sport” had a few changes to …show more content…
I was taught to be concise, while at the same time being concrete. Over the course, my vocabulary became increasingly better because of my investment in a thesaurus just for English 101. I selected, “Olympic water sport” and “Combatting absences” for my portfolio. Those two essays I feel are the most engaging topic that I wrote on this year. In both essays I made sure each paragraph had fluent transitions and conclusions. The selections I chose, demonstrate my knowledge of incorporating sources correctly. Writing concisely has been of my weak points now it is my strong
I attended my first ever collegiate class at Delgado Community College this semester. I feel Exuberant knowing I can excel and comprehend on a college level. Over the course of the year I have learned many new styles, tips and guidelines to writing. For my portfolio I mainly focused on revision using “combatting absenteeism “and “Olympic water sport” because those essays had a substantial amount of room for improvement. I will be using the “student profile” because it proves my mastery of writing profile essays. In college being concrete is important, so I also chose the descriptive paragraph as an example of an acquired style choice.
With my proposing a solution essay, “combatting absenteeism” I moved some paragraphs around to make the problem of absenteeism more clearly brought to the reader’s attention. While moving paragraphs around, I added transitions and made others read smoother so the essay flowed interruption free like a song. To meet the MLA requirements I fixed any errors in my work-cited page as well. This essay was my favorite essay to write this year, because I chose a topic that was interesting to me.
Writing about my favorite event in the Olympics gave me a run for my Grade for sure, although I received a good grade. “Olympic water sport” had a few changes to …show more content…
I was taught to be concise, while at the same time being concrete. Over the course, my vocabulary became increasingly better because of my investment in a thesaurus just for English 101. I selected, “Olympic water sport” and “Combatting absences” for my portfolio. Those two essays I feel are the most engaging topic that I wrote on this year. In both essays I made sure each paragraph had fluent transitions and conclusions. The selections I chose, demonstrate my knowledge of incorporating sources correctly. Writing concisely has been of my weak points now it is my strong