Society has set a standard for high school graduates to complete their education through attendance of a university. Personally I aimed to fulfill that standard by attending the second largest university in the state. When applying to the University of Central Florida, applicants were given the opportunity to prove to the reader that they are a respectable, independent, and well-rounded student in around 500 words or less. Which, because there is so much to talk about yet we are restricted by the limited word count, can be a strain for some students. I was determined to make the most out of my opportunity and deliver the best essay to the University. Out of the topics listed, I chose the two that were easiest for me to elaborate on, and
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They are now critiquing my piece with a more creative approach. They just don’t want a video that answers questions given, but they want some sort of a storyline to go hand in hand with the responses. But what an essay does, that a video can’t, is that it allows the audience to interpret the content in their own way. Videos tend to be very direct, this sometimes loses the audience’s interest and can even bore them. Therefore, in order to keep the viewer’s curiosity , the length of the project should be limited to a more appropriate time span. Being that it is a film, there is the opportunity to give the audience visual aids on how exactly things went down, and this allows the use of descriptive football, which will be explained in the video. Music will be displayed to accompany the film. This permits the chance to set the mood for the spectators. Whether it be that of a sentimental tone or a motivational one. Music is mainly known for being a trigger of emotion to its listeners. And when used in the right circumstances, it can be an advantage. With this genre, there is the opportunity to expand how I reach out to my audience, something essays tend to lack. And this is why I needed to change certain aspects of my application because of the …show more content…
This will help them understand how much football meant to me. In this scene I will mention, how I grew up around the sport, and at times it was my way of escaping reality. I will then elaborate by explaining how kids on the block would always want to play a game of catch. This allows me to show the community and the little leagues that are around my high school, and how they affected my attraction to the sport. After this, In order to dramatize and intensify my piece I plan on going through my incident exactly how it occurred but at a slower pace. I will black the screen out in the event of the collision that caused my concussion. And thereafter, I will appear in a hospital with the neck brace that I had. I would then talk about how this event affected my life, but didn’t control it. And eventually, tell the audience how I came across the university and why I wanted to be a part of the Knights community. UCF stood for diversity and that’s what I was all about, it was the best fit for me. I felt that, in order for my life to continue moving forward, I would need to attend this amazing
They are now critiquing my piece with a more creative approach. They just don’t want a video that answers questions given, but they want some sort of a storyline to go hand in hand with the responses. But what an essay does, that a video can’t, is that it allows the audience to interpret the content in their own way. Videos tend to be very direct, this sometimes loses the audience’s interest and can even bore them. Therefore, in order to keep the viewer’s curiosity , the length of the project should be limited to a more appropriate time span. Being that it is a film, there is the opportunity to give the audience visual aids on how exactly things went down, and this allows the use of descriptive football, which will be explained in the video. Music will be displayed to accompany the film. This permits the chance to set the mood for the spectators. Whether it be that of a sentimental tone or a motivational one. Music is mainly known for being a trigger of emotion to its listeners. And when used in the right circumstances, it can be an advantage. With this genre, there is the opportunity to expand how I reach out to my audience, something essays tend to lack. And this is why I needed to change certain aspects of my application because of the …show more content…
This will help them understand how much football meant to me. In this scene I will mention, how I grew up around the sport, and at times it was my way of escaping reality. I will then elaborate by explaining how kids on the block would always want to play a game of catch. This allows me to show the community and the little leagues that are around my high school, and how they affected my attraction to the sport. After this, In order to dramatize and intensify my piece I plan on going through my incident exactly how it occurred but at a slower pace. I will black the screen out in the event of the collision that caused my concussion. And thereafter, I will appear in a hospital with the neck brace that I had. I would then talk about how this event affected my life, but didn’t control it. And eventually, tell the audience how I came across the university and why I wanted to be a part of the Knights community. UCF stood for diversity and that’s what I was all about, it was the best fit for me. I felt that, in order for my life to continue moving forward, I would need to attend this amazing