The ongoing debate about how vicious or harmless Pitbulls are has been an ongoing debate in society. “Pitbulls Should Be Banned” is the name of the forum started on Sciforums.com by user “Valich”. This article enlists the call to action for the banning of the breed of dogs known as Pit Bulls, due to their vicious behavior and running record of attacks on children and adults. Parents and those who care for children are the intended audience for this article, this audience will be more sensitive to his proposition of banning these dogs that have become a danger to society.There is no background information about the author, this diminishes the author's credibility, because we do not know why he chose to write about this argument. The entire breed of Pit Bulls should not be banned.
Valich’s main point in this article is the fact that Pit Bulls are vicious ‘killing machines”. His numerous statements declaring that Pit Bulls kill people is correct, because they do, according to DogsBite.org, Pit Bulls caused 71% of …show more content…
However, the author did do a nice job stating his point and making sure that the readers understood what his side was. There could have been a lot more evidence added to make his argument a lot stronger. Emotional appeal became overused throughout the piece by stating the story about the woman from California being mauled by the pit bull. This helped get the reader emotionally attached to what the author was stating and so that they have an example of why they believe what they do. There are some ways that Valich wrote a good piece of writing, however, there are also some ways that it can be fixed so that it does not seem as bias and one
Valich’s main point in this article is the fact that Pit Bulls are vicious ‘killing machines”. His numerous statements declaring that Pit Bulls kill people is correct, because they do, according to DogsBite.org, Pit Bulls caused 71% of …show more content…
However, the author did do a nice job stating his point and making sure that the readers understood what his side was. There could have been a lot more evidence added to make his argument a lot stronger. Emotional appeal became overused throughout the piece by stating the story about the woman from California being mauled by the pit bull. This helped get the reader emotionally attached to what the author was stating and so that they have an example of why they believe what they do. There are some ways that Valich wrote a good piece of writing, however, there are also some ways that it can be fixed so that it does not seem as bias and one