I did my best in the take home essays because I was sure I couldn 't do a good writing in class. Because of the factors of time, stress, and panic my two in class essay was horrible. In the class essays I should have to work a 15 minutes brainstorming and a 45 minutes writing. In my normal conditions I spend more than eight hours brainstorming and a whole day writing. So imagine the miserable result. It was without a doubt disastrous. The miracle is I got C- in my first impromptu which I think I didn 't deserve. I think you considered working under pressure that 's why you gave me this grade. What I didn 't like in my essay is that I wasn 't able to organize my time. I spent a lot of time thinking and searching which put me under more pressure. As a result, I had no time for revision. I didn 't cite one of my sources, and I had many grammar mistakes as well. There was a repetition of ideas within my essay as well; but, the good thing was being a good trial for the second
I did my best in the take home essays because I was sure I couldn 't do a good writing in class. Because of the factors of time, stress, and panic my two in class essay was horrible. In the class essays I should have to work a 15 minutes brainstorming and a 45 minutes writing. In my normal conditions I spend more than eight hours brainstorming and a whole day writing. So imagine the miserable result. It was without a doubt disastrous. The miracle is I got C- in my first impromptu which I think I didn 't deserve. I think you considered working under pressure that 's why you gave me this grade. What I didn 't like in my essay is that I wasn 't able to organize my time. I spent a lot of time thinking and searching which put me under more pressure. As a result, I had no time for revision. I didn 't cite one of my sources, and I had many grammar mistakes as well. There was a repetition of ideas within my essay as well; but, the good thing was being a good trial for the second