Although he ended up doing everything that he wanted in life and becoming extremely successful, he knows that I now have more opportunities in my life. Attending a prestigious institution is a dream he has for me, but I do not think he realizes that I am not very competitive at all. I would describe myself as a smarter than an average white teenager who lives a privileged life in the suburbs. Nothing differs myself from the next white kid, but my intelligence. There are still countless others who take all advanced placement classes like some school wizard. One type of person that I know colleges do not look for in applicants is a smart, privileged, white student. Sure, I may be a natural born leader in the classroom and throughout other walks of life. Sure, my social skills may be better than most of my peers’; however, that will not get me into any of these schools when I am competing with kids who have their personal struggles to write about. Anything from growing up with both parents having two jobs to the “struggle” of being a minority in America today is far more interesting in a college applicant’s essay than in mine about my openly basic and privileged
Although he ended up doing everything that he wanted in life and becoming extremely successful, he knows that I now have more opportunities in my life. Attending a prestigious institution is a dream he has for me, but I do not think he realizes that I am not very competitive at all. I would describe myself as a smarter than an average white teenager who lives a privileged life in the suburbs. Nothing differs myself from the next white kid, but my intelligence. There are still countless others who take all advanced placement classes like some school wizard. One type of person that I know colleges do not look for in applicants is a smart, privileged, white student. Sure, I may be a natural born leader in the classroom and throughout other walks of life. Sure, my social skills may be better than most of my peers’; however, that will not get me into any of these schools when I am competing with kids who have their personal struggles to write about. Anything from growing up with both parents having two jobs to the “struggle” of being a minority in America today is far more interesting in a college applicant’s essay than in mine about my openly basic and privileged