Why Gun Ownership Should Be Held More Strictly: Essay

900 Words Jan 8th, 2015 4 Pages
Omar Farah
English 3 Part 2:
Why gun ownership should be held more strictly:

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I chose the topic “Why gun ownership should be held more
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We all agree that guns take lives and no doubt about it. That why we should have much stricter gun control laws that prevent weapons ending up in wrong hands. That will indeed prevent much of the violence and deaths caused by guns. I believe that if the world was a place with no weapons, except people in the law enforcers the world would be a much safer place. I don’t believe that all crimes can be put to a stop, but many lives will be saved.

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I chose the topic “Why gun ownership should be held more strictly ” because most of our daily news flashes say at least someone was shot and killed or shot and injured . I do n’t like this ; it is senseless and very sad . We are losing people every day , because someone is using their gun recklessly or leaving it where someone else have access or easily found . I do n’t get why people kill people it is just inhumane and against our morals. Guns have very high danger to our country as well as other countries . That is why I pick or chose to write about this topic for my persuasive essay because that is what I see in guns and want people to see it too .
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