“Slip out of abstraction” is the third recommendation. He wanted the writer gave clearly details or examples, not just lay out the facts. Furthermore, he suggested an essay should be “get rid of obvious padding.” This means the author instead of adding more words to reach 500 words limit, he’d better add extra contents and prove them. He also said “Call a fool a fool.” A simple way to present a matter is to “decide what you want to say and say it as vigorously as possible.” Besides, “Beware of Pat Expressions” is one more thing that the author wanted a writer to try to do. He includes examples of pat expressions, such as “the time of his life,” “to the ends of the earth,” and “took the easy way out …” He claimed that it is hard to avoid them, but the writer should limit their use. Finally, he emphasized the difference and importance of using colorful, colored and colorless words. Using colorful words can help reader imagine the scene with an emotion. While some colored words can have a positive effect, they also have a negative effect when they were used in other
“Slip out of abstraction” is the third recommendation. He wanted the writer gave clearly details or examples, not just lay out the facts. Furthermore, he suggested an essay should be “get rid of obvious padding.” This means the author instead of adding more words to reach 500 words limit, he’d better add extra contents and prove them. He also said “Call a fool a fool.” A simple way to present a matter is to “decide what you want to say and say it as vigorously as possible.” Besides, “Beware of Pat Expressions” is one more thing that the author wanted a writer to try to do. He includes examples of pat expressions, such as “the time of his life,” “to the ends of the earth,” and “took the easy way out …” He claimed that it is hard to avoid them, but the writer should limit their use. Finally, he emphasized the difference and importance of using colorful, colored and colorless words. Using colorful words can help reader imagine the scene with an emotion. While some colored words can have a positive effect, they also have a negative effect when they were used in other