Laying in agonizing pain,(absolute phrase) Mark awakens to the realization of debri puncturing his suit, lacerating his abdomen. He comes to the immediate realization of being left alone on the planet Mars. He realizes he needs three things to survive: water, food, and oxygen(colon). The overwhelming fear of isolation grips the audience as Mark must overcome the loneliness of being the only human being left to survive. Alone on Mars, he somehow summons the courage, gathers willpower, and finds ingenuity (parallel structure) to survive an impossible
Laying in agonizing pain,(absolute phrase) Mark awakens to the realization of debri puncturing his suit, lacerating his abdomen. He comes to the immediate realization of being left alone on the planet Mars. He realizes he needs three things to survive: water, food, and oxygen(colon). The overwhelming fear of isolation grips the audience as Mark must overcome the loneliness of being the only human being left to survive. Alone on Mars, he somehow summons the courage, gathers willpower, and finds ingenuity (parallel structure) to survive an impossible