This piece of writing is going to talk about baseball. But in more depth it will tell the reader about books written about baseball. Also it will tell the reader about a Theory to when baseball was invented. Also it will tell the reader about New rules and old rules of baseball. And a little about baseball today. Don’t see thesis statement.
Body paragraph 1: There are many theories to when baseball was invented. The fantastic sport of baseball has an undecided invention date although there are some theories. One theory is “that it was invented in 1760” (Library of congress 1). Another theory is “that it was invented in 1845” (Npr 1). Another theory is baseball was invented in 1861 (Fact monsters 1). Also there is a theories that baseball came from the sports "four-old-cat", or "rounders" (library of congress 1).
Body paragraph 2: Books on baseball and what a baseball is made out of.
One of the many books is called "Baseball in the garden of Eden written by John thorn" (Npr 1). There are many other books about baseball. You go from talking about books to talking about whats on the inside of a baseball. The center of the baseball is a …show more content…
They changed that rule to get the batter out you have to tag him with the ball in your glove to get him/her out unless the ball was caught before it hit the ground Run on sentence. (Npr 1). Another rule is that the batter can not get out if he goes past first but still touches the base. Another rule is that when a runner (a batter that got on base) runs to home the catcher (or the pitcher) must tag him/her with the ball. Another rule is that when the catcher drops the ball on the third strike he/she can either tag the batter or throw that ball to the first baseman and the batter will instantly be out. Try adding more evidence. You only have 4.7% of evidence in your
Body paragraph 1: There are many theories to when baseball was invented. The fantastic sport of baseball has an undecided invention date although there are some theories. One theory is “that it was invented in 1760” (Library of congress 1). Another theory is “that it was invented in 1845” (Npr 1). Another theory is baseball was invented in 1861 (Fact monsters 1). Also there is a theories that baseball came from the sports "four-old-cat", or "rounders" (library of congress 1).
Body paragraph 2: Books on baseball and what a baseball is made out of.
One of the many books is called "Baseball in the garden of Eden written by John thorn" (Npr 1). There are many other books about baseball. You go from talking about books to talking about whats on the inside of a baseball. The center of the baseball is a …show more content…
They changed that rule to get the batter out you have to tag him with the ball in your glove to get him/her out unless the ball was caught before it hit the ground Run on sentence. (Npr 1). Another rule is that the batter can not get out if he goes past first but still touches the base. Another rule is that when a runner (a batter that got on base) runs to home the catcher (or the pitcher) must tag him/her with the ball. Another rule is that when the catcher drops the ball on the third strike he/she can either tag the batter or throw that ball to the first baseman and the batter will instantly be out. Try adding more evidence. You only have 4.7% of evidence in your