Readers can see the problem with students' knowledge once they are out of high school, but his shift from "not all students should to a four year college institute" to "the only thing employer want to know is if you have the paper to say your qualified" makes the reader not take the problem as serious as he does in the end. Murray could have given more information with numbers and statistics to make his audience lean more towards his side of the argument. Without sources and his background, readers do not understand why he is against not everyone go to four year universities. Murray's purpose of this argument was to give readers another perspective on every high school graduates going to college. He want people with IQs to choose other options, because they might misinterpret complex text and make errors in
Readers can see the problem with students' knowledge once they are out of high school, but his shift from "not all students should to a four year college institute" to "the only thing employer want to know is if you have the paper to say your qualified" makes the reader not take the problem as serious as he does in the end. Murray could have given more information with numbers and statistics to make his audience lean more towards his side of the argument. Without sources and his background, readers do not understand why he is against not everyone go to four year universities. Murray's purpose of this argument was to give readers another perspective on every high school graduates going to college. He want people with IQs to choose other options, because they might misinterpret complex text and make errors in