Personal Narrative-It's Worst Mistake

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It had been exactly 20 years since Laura made the worst mistake of her life. When she turned on Rachel. It didn’t make her fit in, it only lasted a week. Then she was the victim again. Laura had no one. She tried to talk to Rachel but she ignored her. This had been the biggest mistake she had ever made.
Now years later Laura is a single mom with a 15 year old daughter. Octavia was identical to her mother. Her father left when she was six years old, but they are good. Laura is writing in the newspaper and is still writing poems. She lives in the same neighourhood, just a few houses away from her childhood home.
Rachel on the other hand is a veterinarian. She owns her own business nearby. She moved into a safer neighbourhood and now lives
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Vanderwal. How are you today?” he asked as her shook her hand. “I’m great, how are you?” “I’m good thanks. Come in, my mom has been dying to meet you” he closed the door and lead her to the kitchen. Her mouth dropped open when she saw who it was “Rachel?” Rachel looked to see who had called her name and she was shocked to see who it was. She never wanted to see Laura after high school. “Hi Laura. Why don’t you guys go and wash up for dinner” the three kids nodded and raced to see who would get there first. “So how’ve you been” Laura asked trying to make conversation. You couldn’t cut this tension with a chain saw. Rachel gave her a look of shock mixed with anger. “How have I been? You can’t walk into my house and just act like everything is ok.” She said as she walked into the dining room to put dinner on the table. “I felt horrible. I’m so sorry” Laura followed her out to the dining room. “You felt horrible. What about me? That was the worst day of my life. Everyone was laughing and clapping till I left high school. We were friend but you turned your back on …show more content…
This made Laura fell even worse. “I’m sorry” “Stop saying you’re sorry” Rachel was full on yelling now. The kids got worried and went to check on their moms. “Is everything ok in here?” “Yeah everything is fine. So sot down at the table we’ll be right there” Rachel watched them go to the table. When they sat Octavia and Luke where talking huge smiles on their faces and she realize if thing feud went on any longer the kids would catch on and break up, plus shay had fallen in love with Octavia she can’t take that away from her either and Rachel didn’t want to be the reason her kids are unhappy. “I get why you did it, but it doesn’t make it right. I believe in second chances. I got one and you should too. I forgive you but I don’t fully trust you, but over time I will ok. Our kids are happy so let’s be happy” Laura was shocked. But happy that she was forgiven and she was going to gain back her trust. They smiled and Rachel went in for a hug. Then they walked into the dining room and sat on the right side, the happy couple was on the left and Jake and say were on each end. They gave everyone a reassuring smile. Laura had finally made everything

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