I thought that some of what I was writing had a obvious message but it turned out that I need to write more explanation to get my point across. This specifically happened with my first essay about pop culture. I made connections that were not written down that I thought may naturally come to the reader or might sound repetitive if I wrote it down. However, while editing the essay to put my explanation down in writing, I made even more connections that I did not originally see before. In my second essay, I made a point about how language is view differently here in America than other parts of the world but did not go into detail. After getting your feedback, I added more and feel that it made my essay stronger. I am going to take this lesson being specific and explaining everything in depth with me and use it in future
I thought that some of what I was writing had a obvious message but it turned out that I need to write more explanation to get my point across. This specifically happened with my first essay about pop culture. I made connections that were not written down that I thought may naturally come to the reader or might sound repetitive if I wrote it down. However, while editing the essay to put my explanation down in writing, I made even more connections that I did not originally see before. In my second essay, I made a point about how language is view differently here in America than other parts of the world but did not go into detail. After getting your feedback, I added more and feel that it made my essay stronger. I am going to take this lesson being specific and explaining everything in depth with me and use it in future