What Makes A Good Friend By Alex Lickerman Analysis

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In this portfolio is my definition pattern, teacher edited essay from a journal called “What Makes a Good Friend” by Alex Lickerman. The essay explains that everyone has their own criteria for what makes their best friend. I choose this essay for the simple fact that this subject is something I can personally reflect from. I recently served five years in the Marine Corps and true friends is something I take seriously. This essay started from an outline and then four copies later I was able to produce a final draft. I believe the strength of this essay would be that it comes from the heart. Everything I wrote in this essay is a direct reflection of what I believe in. However, the weaknesses of this essay would my skill level. I have been out

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