“You need to add a little more of this, and a little more of that.” I absolutely hated it. Everything I did seemed wrong like I was never meant to do anything right. I remember writing a narrative assignment and my teacher telling me that I had way too much detail after she had told me to make sure I described everything. Soon after that, when I wrote, I started using less detail and criticism on that began after that. At that the point of my writing I knew I was not good at writing as a whole. Not a single person told me something positive about my writing. It was always, “This is good but maybe you can add this to it to make it better”, or “maybe is you didn’t have this in here then maybe the reader won’t be confused.” There was always something there wrong. I just wanted to be able to express myself in a way that wouldn’t be considered
“You need to add a little more of this, and a little more of that.” I absolutely hated it. Everything I did seemed wrong like I was never meant to do anything right. I remember writing a narrative assignment and my teacher telling me that I had way too much detail after she had told me to make sure I described everything. Soon after that, when I wrote, I started using less detail and criticism on that began after that. At that the point of my writing I knew I was not good at writing as a whole. Not a single person told me something positive about my writing. It was always, “This is good but maybe you can add this to it to make it better”, or “maybe is you didn’t have this in here then maybe the reader won’t be confused.” There was always something there wrong. I just wanted to be able to express myself in a way that wouldn’t be considered