In your story I really enjoyed how successfully you delivered your plot. The point of view from which your story was told from was clever and presented in an objective manner where we learn about the characters but we never become knowledgeable of the ending. The plot does so much for the story in great way that a lot of the characters that are important remain flat an as a reader you want to learn more about them and their relationship with the "Dad" and "Mom". Such as Betti I seen her as an important role in two scenes especially informing the Dad character about the birth of the narrator. Readers can be given a quick description by the father being he has vague knowledge of the character Betti. Maybe describing her voice or his opinions
