Christopher, I think you have great research facts to back up your essay's stance. The Denmark 'Fat Tax example is a great way to show a government's failed attempt to regulate people's eating habits. Also, the New York City's requirement for calorie listing of restaurants' foods that overall resulted in no change in eating habits shows another failure. I like your ideas of offering educational programs or free gyms to encourage physical activity and making healthier eating choices. Those sound like good suggestions to me. I think you did a great job on your essay and included strong research behind
