Narrative Essay About Love

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The school year ended and we still went to each other 's houses and played, we talked about the fourth grade and hoped we got the same teacher. During the summer vacation from school, my heart started pounding and racing fast anytime i got near Maria, I didn’t know why. Even the thought of Maria made a small smile on my face. It was Maria’s birthday during the summer but she didn’t want a party but i still made her a present and as i did i realized something. I made a drawing of Maria and me playing with her dolls, i didn’t mind what we did as long as I was with her, and as I was drawing i ended up drawing a heart around us, i erased it but i realized i was in love with Maria. I fell in love with my best friend in the whole world and i didn’t …show more content…
is that what she meant?” I said to myself as I lay down on my bed. While doing my homework all I could think about was Maria and how much I wanted to express my feelings for her. For english we were all suppose to write at least half a page of whatever we wanted, I’ve always was good at writing poetry, so i decided to write one about me feelings for her. The next day during school I told Maria, that I was going to write a short story about love and the poem i wrote for class was part of it, but in reality the poem was for her. I stood in front of the class and said “Poetry is my thing and here 's a piece I wrote” some parts I knew were weird seeing that i didn’t know if she felt the same but i had to make it sound like a man was saying it to his wife “Love sweet as nectar, love so true. days without you are days i never want to see again. You are the shine to my world, you make me smile and i hope i do the same for you. The beauty of this world is nothing compared to you,” I looked at Maria as she smiled at, my face started turning a bit red from being a bit embarrassed but as long as she liked it I was fine and happy “Earth, Mars, Neptune nor the Sun is bigger than my love for you. My heart aches for you, you are the only one for me. So say I love you and I‘ll say it two. Love so true, love sweet as nectar, I know our love is the sweetest. At night when i have nightmares i think of you and they become …show more content…
No one could separate us, or so we thought. It was close to the halfway mark of school, Maria and me were in a small project together, all we had to do is write a short vow about any subject. Of Course we chose friendship, we didn 't want to be separated and didn’t want to be separated so we made up this vow for us “like the brightest star in the darkest night, our friendship shall shine bright,” we held hands “even if our hands are pulled away” we smiled at eachother “we will always be together in the bonds of friendship.” That day I was ready to tell Maria how I felt but… well this is where i began earlier in the

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