Paper 3 outline
Introduction: In the video, Jean Kilbourne said that the women in advertisements always need to have perfect look and good figure. Many women feel ashamed when they failed to achieve physical perfection and ideal beauty. (thesis) I agree with her and such ads have bad influence on women, especially to teenagers. These kinds of ads may do harm to their health mentally and physically, even risk their life, when they trying to achieve perfect appearance.
Body:
1. I will talk about my views. I think everyone care how they look and want to achieve good figure. However, nobody is perfect. The perfect women in ads have good makeup or the pictures were photoshopped. Like she said in the video, even supermodels and actress do not believe
Introduction: In the video, Jean Kilbourne said that the women in advertisements always need to have perfect look and good figure. Many women feel ashamed when they failed to achieve physical perfection and ideal beauty. (thesis) I agree with her and such ads have bad influence on women, especially to teenagers. These kinds of ads may do harm to their health mentally and physically, even risk their life, when they trying to achieve perfect appearance.
Body:
1. I will talk about my views. I think everyone care how they look and want to achieve good figure. However, nobody is perfect. The perfect women in ads have good makeup or the pictures were photoshopped. Like she said in the video, even supermodels and actress do not believe