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After school dismissal is always a fun time for my friends. We would go to Leif Ericson Park everyday after school just to chill on top of the Red House, and the playground that we never feel too old for. Looking down from the roof, I spotted her with my eyes. I didn’t do it again today. I’ve liked this girl for a while, she recently joined our friend circle and I took an interest in her. Her name is Jessica Lu. “Don’t think you should go for it, dude.” stated Reas, my logical side. “No, go for it. Stop doubting yourself.” countered Sens, my emotional side. I often have these inner conflicts with my two conscious. I often lean toward Sens, and want to tell her my feelings. But Reas convinced me and held me back. It was rough.

Walking down the road to the park, this time I’m right next to her.
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“Come and play with me.” “Here is your chance!” exclaimed Sens! We walk toward the Viking ship. I have finally done it. I confessed to her and surprisingly she accepted me.

The Christmas-tree was dark as eclipses and whiffed of bleach. The ground thickens as more snow come down the sky. “Wanna chill and have a little snowball fun?” I said as I winked.
“Of course. Watch out cuz’ you gonna shiver all over from my snowball hits,” said Jes confidently.
We race to the open field inside Leif Ericson Park, and prepare for our first ever snowball fights. She is not so great at aiming but she hit me almost everytime, and I missed almost every time as if we switched. Sometimes she slips on the snow and I ran toward her to check on her but it was just her trick of getting more hits on me. It was quite a fight. We lied on the snow floor.
“Qihong.”
“Yeah?”
“That was fun. Wasn’t it? I wish this moment would stay forever.”
“Yeah, same….”
Her words brought me a sense of sadness. It reminded me that we only have a few more months before we go to different schools, and will see each other less often. An idea flash before

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