During the next few weeks, the class worked on multiple comma assignments handed out by Mrs. Fleming because I was not the only one struggling. After a few unsatisfactory comma grades, I took it upon myself to personally ask Mrs. Fleming each time a comma related question. This allowed me to see the mistakes I was making when writing, and Mrs. Fleming was personally able to assist in the correction of my mistakes. From then on out, I spent the majority of my time revising my paper specifically searching for careless comma mistakes. The time I spent searching for comma errors paid off because I reduced the number of comma errors on my second paper to only one (“Benefits of Volunteering”). Although one or two errors is not perfect, it is expected on a rough draft. This led me to believe that over the past twelve weeks, I had become a more proficient and efficient
During the next few weeks, the class worked on multiple comma assignments handed out by Mrs. Fleming because I was not the only one struggling. After a few unsatisfactory comma grades, I took it upon myself to personally ask Mrs. Fleming each time a comma related question. This allowed me to see the mistakes I was making when writing, and Mrs. Fleming was personally able to assist in the correction of my mistakes. From then on out, I spent the majority of my time revising my paper specifically searching for careless comma mistakes. The time I spent searching for comma errors paid off because I reduced the number of comma errors on my second paper to only one (“Benefits of Volunteering”). Although one or two errors is not perfect, it is expected on a rough draft. This led me to believe that over the past twelve weeks, I had become a more proficient and efficient