What I Learned During My Writing Process

I chose to revise the first and forth essay. I chose these because they are the shortest essays. I know you wanted me to revise my research essay because I did not have parenthetical citations, but during my writing center visit I asked about those and I learned where they should be and how they should look. When I revised my papers I tried to think about the questions someone else who is not familiar with the topics would ask about my papers and I answered them. I did this more so for the narrative because I am the only one who knows exactly what I experienced during my retreat, so I tried to make it as clear as possible what it was like. This was not as necessary for the first paper because everyone can easily make an opinion about if superheroes are bad for kids development or not. …show more content…
The thing that changed was I can now better expand on my thoughts. I can now also write papers faster because I learned about what works best for me and what my specific writing style is. For the first paper I revised it by re-reading the whole paper and as I saw certain sentences I changed the wording of the ones that stuck out to me as not sounding like the way I would articulate it currently. I also added in a few sentences that I though could add to the clarity of the paper. For my narrative I revised it by adding in extra details about my retreat that would give the reader a better understanding of my experience. Such details as how the retreat house looked, the emotions of the other people and what I did in my free time. I feel my narrative is a bigger