I believe bringing in concrete evidence from another source would validate her argument even more. With this being said, Quindlen has achieved some parts of her argument. She ultimately does inform her audience about her argument by the end of the text. I believe Mike Rose’s “What College Can Mean to the Other America” and Anna Quindlen’s “Sex Ed” have some commonalities. Even though these writings have different arguments, both texts bring in evidence from personal experiences. Rose’s describes going to community colleges for his evidence, and Quindlen describes her own childhood for her evidence. Both of these texts are trying to persuade their audience in one form or another. By bringing in personal experiences and persuading their audiences, Quindlen and Rose achieve creating valid
I believe bringing in concrete evidence from another source would validate her argument even more. With this being said, Quindlen has achieved some parts of her argument. She ultimately does inform her audience about her argument by the end of the text. I believe Mike Rose’s “What College Can Mean to the Other America” and Anna Quindlen’s “Sex Ed” have some commonalities. Even though these writings have different arguments, both texts bring in evidence from personal experiences. Rose’s describes going to community colleges for his evidence, and Quindlen describes her own childhood for her evidence. Both of these texts are trying to persuade their audience in one form or another. By bringing in personal experiences and persuading their audiences, Quindlen and Rose achieve creating valid