1. Identify and describe three strengths in this draft?
What a sweet story about adoption. You did a job describing the many questions that a young child would have about being adopted or adopting a new sister or brother. You story flowed so nicely and had little or no grammatical errors.
2. Identify and describe three weaknesses in this draft?
Only thing I would think you could make it stronger is describing your setting more to give more of an image for your readers. You could maybe think about different word choices in order to give your story a little more punch.
3. How does this draft meet the requirements of the assignment? If not, what is it missing?
You really took time to write a story that would be interesting for your reader. You
What a sweet story about adoption. You did a job describing the many questions that a young child would have about being adopted or adopting a new sister or brother. You story flowed so nicely and had little or no grammatical errors.
2. Identify and describe three weaknesses in this draft?
Only thing I would think you could make it stronger is describing your setting more to give more of an image for your readers. You could maybe think about different word choices in order to give your story a little more punch.
3. How does this draft meet the requirements of the assignment? If not, what is it missing?
You really took time to write a story that would be interesting for your reader. You