Walking On Puka Shells-Personal Narrative

Improved Essays
Walking on Puka Shells
I am walking down the coast of Hanalei Bay, barefoot, and my wetsuit clinging to my body. I am looking for something, but I am not sure of what that is. The sky is grey, something seems off. I look further down the beach and I see something that looks like a body. As I am running closer and closer, the shape begins to take form. The closer I get, the harder it becomes to run. When my eyes have completely focused on the no longer blurred shape — I realize what it is. Or rather...who it is. She is wearing a long ivory dress, no shoes, and a puka shell anklet. Her eyes are open and she won’t move. “MOM!”, I yell. “Mom you’ve got to get up! The tide is coming in!”. She doesn’t move. I start to move to wake her up, but as
…show more content…
White walls, I am on a bed, and there is an IV in my arm. I look to what my IV is connected to and it looks as though it is merely saline. My heart starts beating a million times a minute. Panic is overcoming me. This has to be a bad dream. Reaching to take out the needle from I arm but I stop when I hear footsteps. I lay back down and pretend to be asleep. The footsteps getting closer and closer. Then they stop. I need to think fast. Or maybe not think at all… with all the energy I have I pull the IV out of my arm and swiftly jab it into the stranger’s leg. “AGHHH!” he screams in pain. I jump out of bed as he falls to the floor, my feet picking up speed as I leave the white room. In the hallway there are two ways to go, right or left. I turn left and head for the nearest exit. The first three doors I try are all locked. Then I look and try the fourth door. It opens. I slam the door behind me and lock it. My heart must have jumped out of my body somewhere in the hallway because I can no longer feel it. I can’t really feel anything. The room I am in is enormous. It looks like a hotel suite. How big can this house be? I can tell I am on a second story. BAM! The door swings open as the strange man’s body flies

Related Documents

  • Improved Essays

    It was about 3:45 in the morning on a Sunday, where I found myself and my excited, wide-awake, good-looking boyfriend driving down a dark, eerie road to a hospital that was 61 miles away. Those 61 miles felt like light years to me I didn’t feel right all day today, I had a feeling deep down that my body was telling me that it was time. I was as nervous as I possibly could be, however, I had to remain completely calm because I could possibly be in labor and our first baby could arrive any time. So There I was, just Sitting there in that fast moving car, patiently waiting for the top of my big-ole belly to become super tight, tighter than a rubber band wrapped around your stomach 1000 times.…

    • 400 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    I slowly slid to the side of my bed and was just about to pull the needles out of my arms when all of a sudden I heard a deep voice from behind me. " What are you doing?" I jumped at his voice and turned to glare at him for…

    • 1541 Words
    • 7 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    July-Day 18 I can barely pull myself out of bed today, it's cold outside the blankets that have kept me safe since my descent to dreamland where I have been since 6:30 PM. I've slept for 12 hours and I want to keep sleeping. I want to stay in bed where nothing happens to any extremes. I dreamt of lighthouses and the light it casts out over the clear blue gulf sending a signal of safety to those passing by. I wonder about all the things that are like lighthouses to me.…

    • 783 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Decent Essays

    Name: Zacharie Harvey Date: 09/18/2015 Period:2 Type your essay here: I imagine the classic kindergarten book book “Down By The Bay”, as I sit on the bench at the Suisun City Waterfront. As I look across the glassy water I see the gleaming reflection of the lighthouse. Next to the lighthouse, a man sits as if he was a statue. Lifeless, breathing sporadically, the man gazes into the distance as if he was trying to go somewhere…

    • 614 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Decent Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Unknown forces 2022, height of the trans-Canadian war, and I’m stuck here in school, Washington, 17, still single, like a fuckin nerd. I live alone, but am still not legally an adult, so I can't actually do that much. It was the Thursday of the end of 12th grade. I had a few ideas for what to do once I’m out of 12th, but only a high school degree won’t get you much.…

    • 11650 Words
    • 47 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    9/11 Short Stories

    • 663 Words
    • 3 Pages

    The pale skinned girl walked with the sound of her heels clicking the midnight concrete. Her breath visible in the cold air, she tugged her yellow raincoat closer to her small body. She turned left on the road, coming upon a deserted farmhouse, she was frightened. As she strolled past, there sat a motorcycle, it seemed older, and out of shape. As the streetlamp and lights of the night lit up the old deserted house, she glanced over towards it.…

    • 663 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Wilfredo Monologue

    • 1147 Words
    • 5 Pages

    I listened as she walked away. I can't remember what she was doing, but she ended up coming back with some kind of needle that had something in it. I stayed quiet as she carefully shoved the needle into my neck. It stung, but it oddly gave me some comfort. "…

    • 1147 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Personal Narrative-Pawpaw

    • 745 Words
    • 3 Pages

    It’s a bright autumn morning that consists of brilliant colors, crisp leaves that crunch beneath my feet and the air just cool enough for a light jacket. The holidays are finally here and saying that I am absolutely thrilled would be an understatement. It is my favorite time of year! My stomach begins to growl with hunger in anticipation of what tomorrow will bring. Tomorrow is Thanksgiving and I realize a feast is in store for me.…

    • 745 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    The traces in my mind of my life in Tennessee escaped my thoughts as the salt water breeze took them away. The blankets of snow, that I once knew, turned into white grains of sand that coated the steps of every shop and the bright green blades of grass were now blue curves of water that left me in a trance with every movement. Each house by the shore was painted a different bright color and was home to a collection of beach related trinkets, including broken shells, used as decor, and sand filled jars which were left by past visitors. A hammock was hung on the top story which became my safe haven of fresh air and solitude. Each morning I swung to the slow, crashing of the waves as the sun began to rise.…

    • 504 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    I turned over in my bed, wanting to get out of this dream. Sic Semper Tyrannis... In my sleep, I stopped moving, simply terrorized by the impending horror that inevitably comes in all nightmares.…

    • 1796 Words
    • 8 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Looking into a mirror, I don’t seem normal. My features come off as odd and stand out to me: like my lightly colored skin, high cheekbones, slight pixie nose, small lips, slightly crooked teeth, small eyes, brown hair, and brown eyes. All of these features are perceived to me as puzzle pieces that someone will eventually put together to form a masterpiece. While standing in my small, lilac colored bedroom, I glanced to the left towards my closet as I remembered my mother’s upcoming birthday, and I needed to complete her gift. I began looking through printed photos to find one that would fit perfectly in a frame saying "happiness".…

    • 491 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    The airplane was crowded and unbearable. As if being confined tightly with a bunch of strangers wasn’t enough, I’m extremely motion-sick. I had to keep reminding myself that the grueling plane ride will all be worth it just to see the big, beautiful ocean and to try new, exciting things. After many hours of travelling, my family and I finally arrived in the Dominican Republic; our luxurious home for the next seven days.…

    • 922 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    The Holocaust Short Story

    • 1247 Words
    • 5 Pages

    Holocaust Story “Get up!” the fat officer shouts, “All of you, get up! Now!” We start to get up. We’ve been sitting here for what feels like an eternity; no one has a watch any more so I don’t know how long it’s actually been.…

    • 1247 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    During April of 2015, I stepped out of the car and onto the beach for the first time in Destin, Florida; the salty sea stung my nose as I breathed in a refreshing breath of briny air. The first step onto the sand was like a bed of blankets; soft and comfortable. The way the white sand glided onto my feet and squished between my toes felt like heaven. The waves were singing a delicate lullaby, pulling me closer to them. As I walk towards the ocean with the warm sand beneath my feet, the cold waves lap at my ankles, as if they want to take me away.…

    • 414 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    I was not capable of processing what had just happened, I was stuck, I felt like everything and everyone around me just stopped and it was only me in this nightmare that seemed to have to…

    • 843 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays