Valley Fair Short Story

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Valley Fair
The weekend I went to my grandma's she told me my dad had a surprise for me. I had to go see but I thought it was like a present or something but I was wrong he said we were going to valley fair and well at first I did not know what that was but he explained it and then went and packed which did not take that long then we left and we were going for the whole weekend anyways we started heading and my dad what a goof he was singing and dancing trying to make me laugh and well it worked then he almost hit a turkey and then almost hit two pheasants. Then we finally got to the open road then............there was road construction and i couldn't sleep because the sun as in my eyes so i sat up and we went on through after all
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It took us awhile to get it and by then everybody was watching him and well..........he finally won I got a neon orange and black gorilla and it was heavy so we went around the rest of the park and had fun than we won another gorilla this time it was blue the only blue left so of corse i would want it..... its blue so like the first try he got it so then after that we went to the other side of the park ( after we put the gorillas in the car) and after the ride I wanted to go on he wanted to go on the steel venom looked scary ( was scary) so we got in line and well I was shacking then we got on and I was shacking more and the brakes started to let go and it was loud then.........we took of I started screaming right away really loud and well loud as we went up and down and up and down wow that was horrible.when we got off I could not walk i was falling and tripped but i caught myself then after that we walked by this giant swing thing were it ties you up in a sling harness and when you are locked in the plat form would go down and the rope would pull you up all the way till you got to the top then you would push the button on the side then you fly down and swing past everybody it was like a giant swing only you were flat on your stomach it looked fun......for my dad not for me.when we were done watching them we went to this car ride it was like the movie cars but the cars were old it was fun I had my dad hold the gas …show more content…
I hit the curve a couple times but it wasn't like a road the curve was in the middle of the road so that way if we were not paying attention it wouldn't go in to the water.after we went around and got to the end we got off and went around the rest of the park then came back to go on the Wild thing again then I went to the raft water ride but this time I was on the bridge were when they come down all the water come up like a wave and hits you like one too. After I got soaked we went to the other water ride with these I believe they were like a little older than 21 and my dad went to the spray zone to try to spray us and when we came he got them not me and this one girl got soaked after my dad got her she went under this kinda water fall thing. then once we got to the end there was a leak and it looked like part of the ride and after we went

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