Valerie's Distinctive Signs: A Short Story

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Though Valerie was lost in her own pleasure she could feel the distinctive signs of her brother nearing his peak. Valerie could have done with out her brother wrapping his fingers around her throat, as she already felt as though he was roughing her up quite a bit, but she guessed he just wanted to try and keep her quiet, which wasn’t really fair since he continued to grunt and moan in her ear. Choking and gasping for air Valerie continued to climb up an invisible peak and continuing to soak everything that happened to be below her sensitive throbbing sex.

As Zander’s pace increased the grip of his hands around her neck started to feel tighter, causing a ping of fear to shoot through Valerie. Moving her free hands Valerie pried at her brother’s

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