For example, he is writing about progressions and events that took place in the Cricket game, while using phrases such as, “fell prey to the suspicion” or, “a conspiracy to rob them of victory,” as the excerpt progresses to heighten the tension of the reader as well. O’Neill uses his diction to create excitement at the beginning, but he makes a drastic difference of the amount of excitement from the beginning to the end of the excerpt. This not only shows that he is reaching out to show the reader about the cricket game, but he also is grabbing the reader’s emotions to make them feel just as a part of the game as the narrator …show more content…
This gives the reader a sense of a personal environment because O’Neill is directly drawing them in with his home-type language. Also, his diction shows that he is attempting to use an exciting tone to call the readers in this way. He uses words and phrases such as, “hullabaloo,” “heckling,” and “wisecracks,” to excite the reader by presenting them with informal language used around the