Roberts touches on the topics of crime, mental illness and effects on the children in this situation with as much evidence as possible. Using quotes from influential politicians, research, and experiences from people going through this experience. evidence is indisputable, being unable to argue with the writer gets the readers attention and provides the reader with an insight to the issue. The writer makes sure to use inclusive language throughout the article to bring the reader into the issue. Using words such as "Melburnians", "we" and "us" this provokes the readers desire to do something about this, making them feel as though they can make a difference. Roberts continues to explain what will eventually happen if this problem gets bigger, "Melburnians will be left homeless, hungry and fighting for survival" The writer constantly questions the reader and their thoughts, with rhetorical questions "is this what we want in Melbourne?" and the fact that this is happening in their own city. She provides her own opinion, but it is always provided with evidence, presenting the reader to believe that her opinion is the correct
Roberts touches on the topics of crime, mental illness and effects on the children in this situation with as much evidence as possible. Using quotes from influential politicians, research, and experiences from people going through this experience. evidence is indisputable, being unable to argue with the writer gets the readers attention and provides the reader with an insight to the issue. The writer makes sure to use inclusive language throughout the article to bring the reader into the issue. Using words such as "Melburnians", "we" and "us" this provokes the readers desire to do something about this, making them feel as though they can make a difference. Roberts continues to explain what will eventually happen if this problem gets bigger, "Melburnians will be left homeless, hungry and fighting for survival" The writer constantly questions the reader and their thoughts, with rhetorical questions "is this what we want in Melbourne?" and the fact that this is happening in their own city. She provides her own opinion, but it is always provided with evidence, presenting the reader to believe that her opinion is the correct