Typical Day Narrative

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Let's go back to December 16, 2014, just a typical day at Maiden Middle School. I remember it being lunchtime and, my favorite day of the week, not only because the cafeteria was serving BBQ, but also we had a big wrestling match that afternoon. I was very excited because I had been undefeated for the entire first half of the season, and I was ready to get on the mat. Next thing I know, I am waking up strapped to a board, with a neck brace on, and on my way out of an x-ray. During the match, I had been thrown on my head and knocked unconscious. Rewind to 2 months, prior to that accident, to football season, where I received my first concussion. It was the practice before our big game against Northview, who was undefeated. We were practicing

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