I will be revising my commentary on the Transportation Security Administration for the fourth writing assignment. Along with substitutive editing, copyediting, and line editing, my revised paper will contain no more than two thousand words. I do not plan to make any global revisions to my commentary because I am happy with my current approach on the subject. However, for substantiate editing, I plan to edit, move, and add content to my paper that will improve clarity and overall flow. Also, I plan to fix my paragraph construction in order to strengthen my argument. I believe that adding proper reference introductions and statements to my commentary will further establish credibility on my behalf. For copyediting and line editing, I will comb
