The author of “Toulmin Model of Argument” lacked organization. I found myself wondering what the author was trying to get across. Many of the points were merged together and the article lacked focus; “What was Toulmin’s original purpose--the analysis of how arguments work. On the other hand, some students find it useful to use Toulmin’s model as a basis for a structure and organization” Those two points should have been in separate paragraphs; however, since the points were in the same paragraph it caused the paragraph to seem unorganized. The points in the paragraphs were not developed, which added to the lack of organization and made the article hard to follow. The only thing the author included was what the the six point meant; however,
