Timed Writing Style Analysis

Timed writing pieces are very challenging because writing the perfect piece is far from achievable. There’s always a feeling that you could’ve added more or read it one last time but sometimes time won’t prevail. Although, a perfect piece can be achievable through revision. I believe revising a piece with fresh eyes gives you a better perspective of your writing style and helps you choose things that will enhance your piece. Most of my revisions were not grammatical but for the need to add more substance. Whether it was adding more detail to my paragraphs or putting more emphasis on point-adding substance was key to my revision.
One thing that I knew needed to be revisited was my first example. Referring to earlier I had said that my main