Dear Andres Salinas, I found your approach to introducing of your paper pretty interesting since you chose to introduce the topic with personal experience. However, I failed to notice your thesis statement. I could not find your thesis statement and I kind confused. Could it be you chose to discuss the medical benefits of marijuana versus those opioids? Your use of statistical figures is commendable and underscores the informative nature of scientific research papers. However, I noted that you failed to reference information sourced from other writers or contexts. This establishes plagiarism. Please confer on the referencing styles of APA and MLA as well as others to prevent the risk of plagiarism. The review of your paper will follow
