Thesis Statement For Juvenile Justice Paper

Your paper contains a lot of information that I was not aware of about the justice system for juvenile offenders. I was surprised at how information was available from your three sources.
The main area that I was not sure about was your thesis statement. By standards, it should be the last sentence or couple of sentences to your first paragraph. By asking a couple of question there, I am puzzled. I believe it needs to end with a response of a logical argument. Am I making sense?
When you place information from your sources, you need to follow up with an explanation about the information. In other words, I don’t think you want to end a paragraph with a source information and not follow up after it. There were a couple of spots that you did