When I compare my writing with another piece of writing, I can clearly spot the mistakes on my own writing. One thing I would change for next time is the way I organized my writing because I want to include most important detail at first and the least important detail at last. Additionally, one thing I would try to improve on my writing assignment next time is that correcting pronounce references and modifying repetitive ideas. However, one thing I am most proud of about my writing is that I have a clear purpose and the thesis statement. Since I have a clear thesis statement, I should have also added more specific details in the essay about my perception to clarify to the readers. If I were to rewrite this essay, I would do little more research
